Amazing Poem Christine!

Life second hand experiance.or just top of the head?

Just off the top of my head. =)

Oh i love this poem ur a gret poet

Awwwwww....thts sad......i lik it.....it makes me wnt to cry 4 some reason......keep on writing!

Wow...... Thats really deep! I dont really think that i could give you any criticism good or bad... :) Keep it up, read some of mine if you get the chance.

Jay

Wow u asked for constuctive critism but all i can say is this poem is great it brought a tear to my eye youll understand why if u read my poem guilt

Wow this is poem is really good...it brought tears to my eyes will i was reading it! your really good! keep up the good work and thanks for the comment on mine! *gives you 5 stars*
love always
~Amber Dawn~

Whoa...let me catch my breath because that left me speechless! whoa, how that tugged at my heart strings...all I can say is one of the best poems i've read in a looooong time!
much luv and thx for commenting!!
mandiexOx