This poem was written very well and it flows nicely! 5/5

Oooh, very nice! The picture painted with your words is quite disturbing, makes me think of loner walking a darkened road. Lovely imagery.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I can really relate to this.Simply written but yet with an underlaying deepness of darkness and despair.Sometimes the restlessnes of the soul takes a long time to find the peace it desires and needs so.I hope you find it eventually.

GaryJ

Loneliness and despair. Truly a volatile combination. Very well written.