Interesting poem, even though I didn't completely get the whole theme. Very nice use of words, it made them sound kinda enchanting. Keep it up.

*If you read my poems, please read Breakage point*

Awesome poem. there's u don't read every day. the ending is perfect. it's soo deep. keep writing:)
xoxox

The images you provoke with your words are truly admirable.

This is great . At first I was kind of
confussed about the point you were
trying to make . But as I read on I
got the picture and it was an excellent
one . I've said it before and I'll say it
again your MANIFICENT HUN.....It's
feels great to be back ...exspecially
knowing that I was missing the work of
a great poet like you .

Love ya
Letty