Nicely done my friend....you captured the essence and beauty of the early evening...in such a limited space and format. Great job!

Dear angela... Pardon me for not understanding haiku... But I found it beautiful once I imagined wat you wrote... I find it beautiful... Keep writing and hopefully... Keep guiding aspiring poets like me.... Tahke care... Bye....

Loved it i would never be able to write something like this lol i havnt got a clue lol it was good though i like Haiku xxxx read my poem plz xxx alex xxx

Very nice haiku. I loved the last line! Beautifully penned. Keep it up! :] 5/5

Natalie``

I have said this before to other poets, I must admire who can write one of these. I have tried and failed miserably. To put such power in a few words, amaze me. Well done.

Beautiful little formed piece, which really has that great smooth flow where all the lines blend in, and run on nicely together, but at the same time each line holds its own imagery which connects with the others.

I do hope you return to writing soon, I am missing your work!