This was good.. there were a few week spots in the flow where it was a bit awkward.. other than that, the emotion was clear and overall was a very nice poem! 4/5

First. I just want to say...We have the same name! lol. anyway. I really liked thsi poem. Your descriptions were beautifully phrased. good job.

I realllllly love this poem. It has alot of meaning to it. You have good talent.
I feel this way alot and it sucks ass!!! and it always feels like its gettin worse

This is very well expressed, I'm sure many people casn relate to this and you presented it fantastically with much clarity and strengh. very well expressed aspects and some great use of descriptions and vocab

5/5

Wow i feel the emotions....i can relate at the same time, actually i ask that to my sel tired of everything but despte of that dont give up life must go on and on. great job keep on writing ok god bless5/5

Nice poem, very true. that is how i feel most of the times. i am tired of everything around me.
very nicely written. keep up the great job. 5/5

I've read many of your poems and i have to tell you that you are extremely talented! i love your rhyme schemes and your word choice. you'll make it big someday!!!

Amazing

Inspiring