Comments : A never ending pain;

  • 18 years ago

    by xDieRomanticx

    I LOVED THIS ONE!!

  • 18 years ago

    by silent eyes

    I love it. ~silent eye~

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was very good great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Antithesis

    The quotes worked really well. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Wow. this is erally nice. It gave me goosebumbs. I loved it. Lots of feeling, reat flow, easy read. all-in-all it was a great poem. I'm looking forward to you writing more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    This poem has such meaning. At first I thought this poem was like others. Yet I was mistaken. I love how you ended the poem. It was certainly breath taking.
    5/5

    Cheers x

  • 16 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    AMAZINNGG!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Wow. I thank the heavenly Father that I have never been made to endure a pain to cause such grief. This poem really gets to me. It interests me! I love it for that reason. It is not just pretty rhymes, it has meaning.