I LOVED THIS ONE!! |
by silent eyes
I love it. ~silent eye~ |
That was very good great poem |
by Antithesis
The quotes worked really well. Good job. |
Wow. this is erally nice. It gave me goosebumbs. I loved it. Lots of feeling, reat flow, easy read. all-in-all it was a great poem. I'm looking forward to you writing more. |
by Lemonbread
This poem has such meaning. At first I thought this poem was like others. Yet I was mistaken. I love how you ended the poem. It was certainly breath taking. |
AMAZINNGG!! |
by Katie
Wow. I thank the heavenly Father that I have never been made to endure a pain to cause such grief. This poem really gets to me. It interests me! I love it for that reason. It is not just pretty rhymes, it has meaning. |