by BrokenSmile Aug 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I know we're long over, |
by Jessica
Awww.. this was so sad.. the emotion was clear.. the flow was a little awkward and some of the rhymes felt forced.. there were also a few grammer mistakes, but i'm sure you can fix them.. nice job, keep it up! 4/5 |