I'm not a devil nor angel.....
but inside i am broken
i have Fallen
and i am part Angel.......

[ You say there that you're not part devil or angel, but then a couple of lines later you say 'I am part Angel' ..I think that needs working on abit. ]

It was a good poem, again. You just need to try and fix that above^^ and it will be better. Keep it up!!

Natalie``