by WordsHurt Aug 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
An arrow shot through me |
GReat Poem...I wrote one like it once but wasnt as great as yours i could not picture life without my father!!! 5/5 |
by KJ
OMFG! That poem was so beautiful...full of emotion...perfect...i loved it...5/5 |
by Laurenf7
Wow! amazing poem. i am lost for words |
by Broken Angel
Wow!!!!! This is super sad!!! I almost started crying!! This must be the worst way to lose someone you love!! I hope it didnt really happen!! But its still an amazing poem, really sad and emotional.. Very well written, keep it up and take care!!! You get a well deserved 5!!!! =) |
Wow, this poem is really great. Though it made me cry, it was still really really good. I hope that you didn't loose you're father this way because that would be really bad. But this poem is written amazingly. Keep up the great work. 5/5 |