Daddy You're...Dead?

by WordsHurt   Aug 10, 2006


An arrow shot through me
Tearing my heart apart
Pain stirked me
Breathing is becoming hard

You body lies there lifeless
In a puddle of crimson blood
Face all blue, Hands ice cold
Eyes wide open, staring at me

There's distant screaming
But i can't hear it
Someones talking to me
But i can't hear them

I walk up to your body
Which is covered in white cloth
Big red stains are on it
People standing there are crying

What's happening?
I see your lips move
You're calling me
Running to you with a smile

But they won't let me
"I need to see daddy,
Look he's saying my name"
Whats there problem?

"He no longer lives child"
Tears are coming out of nowhere
"Let me go" I scream
Suddenly I am free

Like a wild animal
I run to you
Taking your hands in mine
Your eyes still closed

"I asked God to let
Me see you one last time"
Your lips are moving slowly
Your voice is weak

A single tear escapes
You smile weakly
"I want you to know
You are my princess
I will love you..even after
I am dead"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    GReat Poem...I wrote one like it once but wasnt as great as yours i could not picture life without my father!!! 5/5

    Noelle Wright

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    OMFG! That poem was so beautiful...full of emotion...perfect...i loved it...5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 17 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Wow! amazing poem. i am lost for words

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Wow!!!!! This is super sad!!! I almost started crying!! This must be the worst way to lose someone you love!! I hope it didnt really happen!! But its still an amazing poem, really sad and emotional.. Very well written, keep it up and take care!!! You get a well deserved 5!!!! =)

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Wow, this poem is really great. Though it made me cry, it was still really really good. I hope that you didn't loose you're father this way because that would be really bad. But this poem is written amazingly. Keep up the great work. 5/5