Your poem made me cry

Beautiful 5/5 great work ur a awsum poet!, very sad though Well done
Love mel

Wow just wow i dont know wat to say i had goosebumps towards the ending this was awsome i loved it i think it is one of the best poems i read on this site great job and as lond as u continue to comment my poems i will do the same for urs:D and thx for the comment on the hero poem:D

keenan

This is one of you the best poem great and the words was amazing truly greatly feelings are in here Thanks for sharing this heartfell poem very good

I love this one alot

geneross

Oh my goodness. this is a really great poem. i love all the dialouge. it kind of gives the whole thing more emotion, because you can almost hear the pain in these voices...or maybe its just me. excellet work! xo~Crissy

Excellent poem i enjoyed it 5/5

This was such a sad poem...you
made it feel like i was there
i loved it!

5/5

^^ i agree with everyone...this is an amazing poem but there are a few mistake that you might want to correct...just a few spelling errors...but other than that it was excellent!

~Michelle~

This poem made meh cry and it made meh think if my dad wuz dead... i would probably die... x.x well great poem! its really great!
~*~Skye~*~

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.congratulations,you have done a great work.take care of you.best regards,michelle x x x 5/5

This was an awesome poem. It was really strong and made me think. I hope it's not true though

Wow, this poem is really great. Though it made me cry, it was still really really good. I hope that you didn't loose you're father this way because that would be really bad. But this poem is written amazingly. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Wow!!!!! This is super sad!!! I almost started crying!! This must be the worst way to lose someone you love!! I hope it didnt really happen!! But its still an amazing poem, really sad and emotional.. Very well written, keep it up and take care!!! You get a well deserved 5!!!! =)

Wow! amazing poem. i am lost for words

OMFG! That poem was so beautiful...full of emotion...perfect...i loved it...5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

GReat Poem...I wrote one like it once but wasnt as great as yours i could not picture life without my father!!! 5/5

Noelle Wright