I agree with you that war is foul and you described that emotion perfectly.
You really are an excellent writter and i appreciate all of the comments you left me!

Really emotional. it's really great.

5/5.G.R.E.A.T poem.I love it.And thanks for the comment you sent me.I wish more ppl would send.Welll Hope to hear from you again.Keep up the beautiful work.

Megan

It seems many of the wars being fought today serves no purpose further than the greed of politicians... its ashame that so many people are forced to give up so much for such a vane purpose...this was a great poem on human sacrafice in the name of war...keep up the great writing

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Todd

Hey can u be one of the ppl who'll comment and vote the ppl who'll win in my contest? like a judge? thankz

Go find the contest named "my first contest" and there u go u'll see the posted poems and just tell me who u think's the best and critique them (comment) and vote them...(when the contest is done) thankz!

Wow! I've never heard someone have the guts to describe war like that...it's exactly the way I feel about it. How ppl are allowed to take someone elses life in the name of good. That's like saying you killed your brother because you thought it was best...you'd go to jail for that so why not killing ppl in mass!......GREAT JOB! 5/5!!!
~Jules

War at iraq kill my cusin

OMG!!!! goood goood goood i lked it very much 5/5