by Aline Aug 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I linger on the fortress’ stairs |
by Tammie
Woah.. so deap and so sad, but such a great job. Nice work. Keep it up. =] |
Its very well rhimed and very well written but i think it is a bi hard to follow for dumb blones like me :P well done keep up the goosd work i will give it a 4 !! |
by Synh
Deep.... very deep.... check out those funky charaxters though. 5/5 |
This is an awesome poem, 5/5 you deserve no less. I loved the rhyming it flowed very smoothly great job! |
by skye
Hey just wirting back , umm i cant get over he was my first love and i know i wont not get over we been together since we were 5 yrs old yea we were child sweethearts so i wont get over but great poem and i am sorry about ur fathers death |