Be Yourself, It Lasts Longer

by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™   Aug 10, 2006


Longing to be perfect,
Wanting to be loved,
Trying to be an angel,
Resisting to be suicidal.

Longing means to wait,
Wanting is nothing you need,
Trying isn't good enough,
Resisting is pointless.

Never long to be perfect,
Don't rush love,
Act like an angel,
Forget about suicide.

Never doesn't wait,
Rushing goes by fast,
Acting is drama,
Forgetting is talent.

Be yourself and who you are,
Love you for you,
You'll end up an angel for,
Death comes when it wants to.

*One of those poems telling you to be yourself...
ღ.Rαynє.ღ

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  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Well, I don't know what to say, usually I base my comments on the comments of the person who left me a comment, if you know what I mean...

    Anyways, when I get a lengthy comment I am inspired to make one.

    Lol.

    Okay, this poem is good.

    The title is a little less-appealing than the poem, I really didn't feel like reading it because of the title but then the poem was good.
    I know the poem goes with the title, but the title just..doesn't work.

    I don't know, do what you want.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. such a great write! i loved the way you told this, and the moral about being yourself was put forward perfectly.. keep it up 5/5..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..Best Wishes..Kirsty Palmer xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. such a great write! i loved the way you told this, and the moral about being yourself was put forward perfectly.. keep it up 5/5..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..Best Wishes..Kirsty Palmer xx

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