by Zack O.o
Seems more like a list than a poem, i suggest putting in |
by Lindsay
This poem is nice, really descriptive =) |
Awww I loved this one too, it was sooo beautiful. It was short and didn't have and particular pattern that I could see but I liked it...I thought you did a great job with it. It was very sweet. |
by Kayla
It was wonderful, Zack be quite... |
by mo_gan
Omigosh that is sooo sweet! keep it up! |
by Zack O.o
Its not wonderful its not bad, try to make everything rhyme more and try to make i more than just a list |