Comments : The Most Beautiful Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    Seems more like a list than a poem, i suggest putting in

    A) more words,
    B) more rhymes, perhaps an Ottava Rime, abababcc

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    This poem is nice, really descriptive =)

    Lindsay

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Awww I loved this one too, it was sooo beautiful. It was short and didn't have and particular pattern that I could see but I liked it...I thought you did a great job with it. It was very sweet.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    It was wonderful, Zack be quite...

    I loved it, your poetry brings a smile ot my face x

  • 18 years ago

    by mo_gan

    Omigosh that is sooo sweet! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    Its not wonderful its not bad, try to make everything rhyme more and try to make i more than just a list