Awww omg that is so sad. I don't know what to say about it except it brought tears to my eyes because there is no pain like that from a boy. Great write.
5.5
Breanna

Wow.. such an amazing write, so sad and powerful, and yet so true, you worte it very well, and deffinatly a 5/5.. keep it upp..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..Best Wishes..Kirsty Palmer xx