Taken over me

by The Lonely Rose   Aug 10, 2006


The devil is taking over me....
should i fight...
should i give in...
he is filling me with thoughts that makes me want to die......
i start to cut as blood dripps down my veins...
the devil turned every one agasint me....he is the one i turn to now...
not even god helped me...
who caught me as i fall...
no one.....
why should i fight...
when i already lost...
as i cry......no one holds me...
but as darkness takes over..
the devil grows in my soul......
taking over it....
having no more freedom...
no more love that i can feel...
taking me away...
to hell where i belong.......
all because the devil has taken over me.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I start to cut as blood dripps down my veins...

    [ Drips not dripps ]

    This was a good poem, aswell. The only minor thing I can suggest is to try and capitilise your I's ..I usually don't care too much about it, but some people can take it serious when reading someones work. Keep it up though.

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    This sent shivers down my spine. I thought that 'why should i fight...
    when i already lost...' was really effective. Keep it up. I'm going to add you to my favourites!

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