This sent shivers down my spine. I thought that 'why should i fight...
when i already lost...' was really effective. Keep it up. I'm going to add you to my favourites!

I start to cut as blood dripps down my veins...

[ Drips not dripps ]

This was a good poem, aswell. The only minor thing I can suggest is to try and capitilise your I's ..I usually don't care too much about it, but some people can take it serious when reading someones work. Keep it up though.

Natalie``