Comments : Yellow heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Dear Mel,

    Very well written... Its simply superb... I guess I have to add you to my favs... Keep writing... This poem is so beautiful... I thinking I ll read that again... Bye...

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    How clever. You turn these words into something incredible, yet leave a deeper meaning wandering through the readers mind. Wow.. Well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is truly phenomenal-the unique use of imagery, metaphor, and the use of color is awesome.Every line is pure poetry and so full of emotion.I love your work as it is somewhat abstract yet so full of emotion and meaning.This is oof your best yet.This piece contains so much it is impossible to comment on the greatness of it.Truly outstanding, so well written and so full of pure emotion.Sad and beautiful.

    GaryJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Campbell

    I love this poem. i really liked the ending. good job!

    chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Damn! That's it...Damn! This is awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Thats awesome really. the metaphors have great imagery, props!

  • 17 years ago

    by kimberly

    I really like alot :) have a good night!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Mellisa --there will never be a second to your work !

    I am speechless...