Way to go, Tim! Excellent Diamante!
I love seeing you try all these forms!
You are doing really well with them!

~Ann

Very well done. Great form. Loved the poem, after all Diamonds are a girl's best friend.

As far as I'm concerned.. well, no. In all seriousness and honesty, you are very talented. You seemed to not only express what beauty is to you, but you seemed to have captured the beauty of a diamond in a sense, which is ironic because this is a diamante (Lol, well yeah I guess you knew that..) I don't know if you planned it to be that way or not, but either way this is a really good poem and I hope you keep it up!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

A very impressive piece in a form I was not familiar with.Despite my past success, I still learn so much from the wonderful poets on P&Q.This is very well done and quite impressive.A tribute to the sensual, the erotic, and the beautiful.

GaryJ

Excellent! I love the ambiance of this piece, it left me smiling.
Glad to see you making use of the thousands of poetry styles there are ;)
Love ya~Holly

Oh ! Timothy this poem just captures the eye and the heart . I love to read and study the different styles of witing P&Q has to offer . And this diamante is wonderful to read .
I have tried to write a diamante (once) after I read one of Holly's and they are much harder to write than one would think .
Yet you've creatd this diamante like a master .
A beautiful talent shines through in this poetic masterpiece . Beautifully penned Timothy !

Wowee-- I tried one of these the other day, but gave up, I found it really hard. You made it look so easy though. You chose excellent wording for this! Loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

What a cool style! i've never seen that before, how neat

I`ve never seen this style before but its really great, perfect wording. beautiful.

This was truely beautiful. Indeed they are so very fun =] I loved your word choice so deep and elegant. Such a delicate yet intriguing piece of poetry. Well done! ~Mel