This peom was an ohkay poem. but it wasnt all to smooth to run through... in the first stanza your rhyming skeme was abcb.. but in the third stanza it was abac... it made it a little harder to stay in the poem. but it was still a good poem. :)

Poem was so/so kinda middle (may just be my tastes but yeah.....)
i got kinda lost while reading it
but it had good feeling
read it a few times, soon i began to like it
~Haze