by Lauren Waszkiewicz Aug 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Mutter a word |
by amoxi
This was a wonderful poem very dep and heartfelt i liked it a lot |
Ha! Loved it. I think the only thing you can do for this is to use some puncuation. Capitalize things and us commas and periods. You know crap like that. :) But other than that, I loved it! I loved this part the best though :P |
by Kurt
Great poem, I'm sure that if I took the time to read every one of your poems I would not be disappointed. Congrats on being such an inspiring poet. |
Wow nice nice work! i loved the emotion and it really painted a picture, loved it! 5/5 |