Wow nice nice work! i loved the emotion and it really painted a picture, loved it! 5/5

Great poem, I'm sure that if I took the time to read every one of your poems I would not be disappointed. Congrats on being such an inspiring poet.

Ha! Loved it. I think the only thing you can do for this is to use some puncuation. Capitalize things and us commas and periods. You know crap like that. :) But other than that, I loved it! I loved this part the best though :P

drop me off at this clinic
leave me here to die
forget me at this prison
don't bother to say goodbye

Excellent

5/5

This was a wonderful poem very dep and heartfelt i liked it a lot