Wow...I really think that's cool. It's kind of like Edgar Allen Poe and Stephen King, only less scary. Very creepy, but awsome.

Dats 1 of the best poems i hav ever heard u are very talented fair play to u

Hey can u be one of the ppl who'll comment and vote the ppl's poem who'll win in my contest? like one of the judge? thankz

Yep, one of the judges.....u'll tell me ur opinions about who u think u want to win! and u'll comment and vote their poem wen the contest is done (like a reward) thankz!

Amazing. made me keep on reading :-)

Nice poem! I liked the rhymes - made it easier to read. Also like the concept ^^
Good work! 5/5

P.S.:Thank you for the comment *hug*