Girl With A Blade

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Aug 11, 2006


You think I'm OK, but the truth is I'm not
nobody wants a girl who's parents forgot

you think I'm OK, but my feelings i hide
and un-noticed mistake, so dead inside

you think I'm ok, but I'm just a really good fake
in love with death and mad to break

you think I'm OK, but behind my door
is a girl with a blade
who cant take anymore

you think I'm OK, but you've not seen my arms,
this is your fault you caused my self harm

please vote/ comment, it means alot to me to know what you think.
love Mel

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXAxTwistedxWishXx

    THIS POEM IS SO TRUE I LOVEE IT..AND YOUR A REALLY GOOD WRITTER

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Aww hun.. i kno how u feel. this is so so sad.. it makes me very sad :( this is a very relatable poem. very true.. sad and deep poem. i love it. keep ur head up high hunn
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by steph

    Omg this poem is so true!!! I canb so relate to it!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    That's how i am....i tought the poem was really good...you seem to be a really talented writer. Nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Char

    Truly moving!

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