Comments : Dying Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very Powerful. Very few words with such a powerful history and connotation. Great Job

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Mel, this was a real tribute to all of those who risk their lives that day . I live not too far from NY ,I wish you could have seen the two spotlights shining into the heavens , where the towers had once stood, It was so eerie,but beautiful. very nice poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi mel, whats your new poem? like this one