Aww.. this was good.. i liked it! very inspirational.. the flow was good, the emotion clear, and the descriptions were nice.. great job! 5/5

Hey there! it's not the kind of poetry I'm used to but I'm willing to adapt! *grins* I actually really liked the way you'd done it! the only comment I would make would be to try and have around the same amount of syllables in each line.... like line 1 and line 3 should be around the same.... say line 1 10 and line 3 12 and then line 2 and 4 have similar... .5 and 8.... but that's about all I have 2 say! *grins* awesome job hun

Ruthie xoxo

I like this poem.. :) it's nice. keep up the work.. 5/5

Andy

Vewry good..even w/o a solid flow or rhyme scheme it still woked for u...nice job i liked it..those thoughts swirl in everyones mind at least once..its ok to have them...but dont let them ruin ur life...
love ya lots,
sore

I can relate to this..
I think all of us does..
Keep ur head high.
-singko-

Wow! Another wonderful write! It was very unique. I can relate. Keep up the great work.

This is really great and easy to relate to! You definately deserve the awards you have, great work! 5/5

Wow... i can really relate to this poem!!! i dont know why but i really can... great job. another

5/5

-Allanah

Oooh, how I can relate to this poem. I liked this one alot. It was worded perfectly too. A very good job! You're a great writer! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

This is a reality poem and hits the point well. Nicely written.

Very well written

Well done.
I enjoyed reading this one, it was different and unique which i like.
It really gets to the point and makes you understand.
much love, Tara-Kay