I really liked this poem it was good keep it up and keep writing and im sure ill keep reading :):):)

plz vote some of my poems plz and giv me some feedback thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

UNCONTROLLING UNFORGETTING.
I CAN'T TELL YOU WHO I AM.
SO DECEIVING UNRELIEVING.
I CAN'T SHOW YOU BEHIND MY MASK.

[ I liked those lines. ]

This one was better than the other one, I reckon. I'm guessing it would be a rock/punk/metal type of song? Anywho, Keep it up!

Natalie``

I enjoyed this piece, the 'chorus' was especially good, and "I can't tell you. so don't ask. I won't say. so just leave.", I enjoyed it. Excellent work.