Graceful Dancer

by The Lonely Rose   Aug 11, 2006


As she dances across the dance floor oh so gracefully...
Flip!!
Turn!!
she shows her posture like a swan going across a lake....
as the music goes faster..
her moves go quicker..
as you look at her in the face...
she is as calm as a river bank.....
but as the music ends...
she gets more aggressive..
but yet graceful..
the music ends..
with her posture standing as high as a mountain...
with her face smiling broadly..
with the crowd cheering like thunder....
now she she going to prepare for her next show...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good.. it was a little bit bland, but i liked the metaphors and descriptions.. the flow was pretty good too.. and the emotion was clear.. in the last line you wrote "she" twice.. nice job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh. I like this one. I love dancers and I think this poem was very nice. I liked the idea of it. I thought it flowed rather well too. I give it a five. Keep up the work. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww that was soo cute..it was lovely i loved it..your description and imagery was perfect...i was a dancer when i was younger and it took me back to those days in my head...i loved it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I really liked this poem it was good keep it up and keep writing and im sure ill keep reading :):):)

    plz vote some of my poems plz and giv me some feedback thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Ooooooooo I liked that, the structure and words used mirror the gracefulness of the dancer. Well done

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