Thi poem was awsome....i havent read one of your forever....and it was great as always...sad but great...i always loved your poems

Beautifully written...i love it!!!!

xoxo becca

Nicely written...i like it

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

So sorrowful and so easy to read..you made a masterpiece with that
Keep it up
Laura

THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM. It was so sad and yet so powerful. The flow was wonderful and the rhyming was great. 5/5

Kalee

That was very sad and depressing, yet had a sweet, sencere since about it. Very nice. 5/5

-Liz-

Another good masterpiece dude... 5/5 for your poem

Omg. again its amzing love <333
wow. exactly how i feel.

Woooooooooow

Such a heartbreaking poem yet written in such a way that people who feel the same can totally relate. You conveyed the feelings of hopelessness and despair with such intense emotions!

You rlly spoke put to me and my life aint great anyway but seeing im not alone rlly helps thankyou for helping me keep strong

Life is hard and it sounds like you know how 2 channel it in2 your poems.not every1 is able 2 do that and you seems very talented.