I think this poem works really well because everyone feels like that at times!
The use of words is really good too because it explains the things that people want in life and they don't cost a penny! But are worth their weight in gold! Well done keep it up!

Great poem as i can relate to it, you have done a great job, and i like your word choice, but it is so sad
keep it up 5/5

That was a good poem, I think we all question stuff like that. The problem with this poem is, you kept switching between 'nobody and no body' It's "nobody" so keep it that way.

I help everyone but why don't help me back......
did i deserve being alone..
just helping people...
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I liked those lines above.

I agree with Darien on this one. The questions were all great, but you needa stick with one 'nobody' instead of switching.

Keep it up!

Natalie``