I liked this exept the rhyming was on and of you should of had it all ryhming or none i think otherwise deep :)

Plz comment on some of my poems as i like as much feedback as poss :):) thnx xxx alex xxxx

Thankyou very much for your lovely comment, i agree, our poems are similar in meaning, its nice to know others are feeling the same way, keep writing and touching peoples hearts, not many people are able to master their talent like yourself