As I read I liked it even more its got a great message. its really good! by the way im heading out to the UK today!

Oh wow. This was just as good as the other two I've read. The flow got a little choppy towards the middle, but it was still a great poem. Loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

P.S. If you like I can Private Message you all the terms for the different types of poetry?

Hey! i liked this one like i liked the other two...this one kinda had more emotion...and i loved the end to...Very well written indeed! Take care

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake