Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol
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plz vote on some of my poems and let me know what you think thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

Oooh. wow. Intense. Loved this one. Very nice flow aswell. I wonna know what happens to him. Lol. =P

Awesome write here though. Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

Hey! this one is Pretty good...the more i read the better it gets..lol but yeh nice piece of work!5/5

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake