Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol
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plz vote on some of my poems and let me know what you think thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

I LOVE all the poems 1-2-3. They are written so good. Well I'll just shut up now and give you that 5/5 =]
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

This poem is really good, it tells a story that people don't often hear. great choce of words, keep it up.