by Twisted Heart Aug 11, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Little child, in your bed |
by HOLLY ARMER
Oh yeah you do have a typo in the last stanza first line: |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow...I'm loving that last line. Very poignant and so enchanting. |
by sibyllene
Ohh! i want to hear this as a lullaby : D |
by Timothy r
This was a joy to read, as all of yours are. I loved the flow. Keep up the great work. Timothy r |
Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol |