I am in awe of this poem, it is writee with such love and sadness, the third stanza is my favorite. it takes a great deal of talent to write with such heart wrenching detail, it is one my favorites I have ever read. Thanx, Timothy r

When did you write this? My my my...I don't remember reading it.
It's truly beyond words, so heart breaking yet refreshing all in the same breath.
Well done. Love ya~Holly

There are too many I'm and I's.
You could clean it up quite a bit and it would read even better....Holly

Wow. That was beautiful yet just.. heartbreaking. I couldn't imagine..

Very nice write. It's been a while since I've read one of your poems, so I'm gonna go look around!

God Bless,
sarah-Joy