This poem kind of hits home with me, I have spent way too much time feeling this way. You chose the perfect words to describe what many of us feel in certain situations. well done indeed. Timothy r

This is so sad-seems you are challenging me for the crown of melancholy and despair-LOL!Seriously, sometimes we must go through the bad to reach the good.But always keep a glimmer of hope.One of the things that has always gotten me through the rough times is that I've been through them before, and know that this too will pass.My best wishes to you.

GaryJ

Delightfully dark, my favorite type of poetry.
Lovely imagery I'd pick my favorite line but there are so many that touch this ebony heart of mine ;)
Keep it up....Love ya~Holly

I think the phrases you used were very new and I like things that haven't been done again and again. I love it when poets bring something new to the table. Great job! 5/5
~Midnight Sun

I really liked this poem, great job.

I loved it..the words and the flow was brilliant...and i liked the last stanza the best!!
keep up the gr8 work
bree

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moment of my life.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX 5/5

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX 5/5