Guilty? You decide (Part 7 Last)

by Rachel   Aug 11, 2006


Just before you make up your mind
I would like to tell you my other find
The diary from which you have previously read
Was written by a man who is now dead

We found it in his parked blue van
In a nearby river was the body of this man
Was he guilty or should he be free
It's now up to you, that's enough from me

* That is the end now, I know it is long but you kind of have to start from part one to follow it. Please let me know what you think xxxxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Hey! the ending was like very Amazing...
    I have been reading the whole series and i liked all of them..the flow, the rhyming scheme in all parts seemed to work!You have a great talent and i hope to read more from you! oh and i decided he was not guilty

    Keep Writing
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much Love
    A.Pathetic.Mistake

  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    Nice ending!
    love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Wow, great that you can tell such a long story in a poem..
    but I can't tell you whether he is guilty or not.. I think I have to read it another time, maybe I'll know it then..
    but very good job..
    xxx

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