Wow, great that you can tell such a long story in a poem..
but I can't tell you whether he is guilty or not.. I think I have to read it another time, maybe I'll know it then..
but very good job..
xxx

Nice ending!
love it!

Hey! the ending was like very Amazing...
I have been reading the whole series and i liked all of them..the flow, the rhyming scheme in all parts seemed to work!You have a great talent and i hope to read more from you! oh and i decided he was not guilty

Keep Writing
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
A.Pathetic.Mistake