by MeGaN bAyBeE Aug 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You was my sister |
by Rach
I liked this one because it was so straight from the heart and I also liked the form. I plan on reading more of your stuff if you have any. I am interested to see something like this but with more structure in the form, you know, like keeping some repetitive pattern to the syllables in the lines as they go down. I'll be watching for more of you in the future. |