I liked this.
It was different, original in concept and I enjoyed the ending muchly.

In answer to your question about my poem Why?
I would say that while people are allowed their own opinion, they don't have to hurt someone while making it known.
For example, they might think someone is ugly, or not very intelligent.
But they could keep it to themselves instead of shouting it for the whole world to hear and upsetting a person for very shallow reasons.

Good point you made though, I never thought of that.
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Another one of your poems that really caught my attention from start to finish, you write in your own unique way and it works well.
5/5