ì thought it was a really interesting poem.. but to be completely honest im not sure why its in the fun and humor as I myself find it fun nor witty, but mabey thats just me havin a wierd sense of humor!

about the poem, i though this ryhme was rather forced;
"And neither will admit he's Rob
Court only just starts out
When we learn Bob 2 is in the mob"
and wasn't really too sure of what that meant!

but to be fair, it picked up towards the middle, and i thought i was easier to read. overall really, i did like the poem, its different and you dont find many "different" poems at the moment.
So it is great, well done, keep writing!
jes xxxx

Im very confused .......im slow so maybe its just me...its funny and i think some people would enjoy it but i think some of it was so random that it was kind of forced as jes said above. u kno how much i love rubber ducks tho....lol..the begininng was good but after about the 2nd stanza i was completely lost. i liked the structure and the flow was ok (coulve been better, some were just weird ways to rhyme).....overall for a smart person this wouldve been kool to read...but im dumb...keep writing...
love ya lots,
sore

Hahahaha! I love funny poems! MWAH! well done babe but forgive i am dumb what is an attorney is it like a lawyer??? loadsa love Cassie x