Princess of Darkness

by Darien   Aug 11, 2006


Princess of Darkness

Shattered hearts into pieces
Poisoned apple a kiss' cure
A curse upon my lips of love
Witch what evil do you stir

Pure in heart she had long ago
When young love lit the skies
In darkness are days at dawn
For she admitted terrible lies

An aura of some false romance
The princess eyes another man
Wicked witch I called my love
You have devised an evil plan

His heart grows cold with grief
Princess you have destroyed love
Weak is your heart you betrayed
Halo and wings taken from above

Love falls in his morbid heart
From witchcraft induced by hate
No jealous intent in his blood
Splattered across a demon's gate

This knight has fallen this night
Under her spells and an evil curse
Kiss from true love will wake him
Fix his heart and all will reverse

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, i thought it was very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    [This knight has fallen this night]

    ^^ That line DID confuse me at first, and I had to read it over again, but I got it. Lol.

    Great write! There's loads of emotion in it that some people my not be able to see. I liekd how deep and dark it was...Very grabbing to the readers' attention. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyra

    Hey this is really good i liked the use of words. 5/5
    ~Kyra~

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    This knight has fallen this night
    Under her spells and an evil curse
    Kiss from true love will wake him
    Fix his heart and all will reverse

    hey this line was great
    i like that and btw this one was great the imaginary was awesome and really the word you said was powerful nice job
    the flow was awesome even if the rhyme was quit a little

    btw sorry for the late response im just buisy

    thanks
    Geneross

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    "Poisoned apple a kisses cure"

    Kisses is the plural of kiss. The possessive of kiss would be kiss's, but you drop the last s to just kiss'.

    I'm kind of a grammar Nazi at my school, so forgive the correction.

    I really love the imagery in this poem, I think you do a great job of setting the mood to almost one of disgust or annoyance and not just "dark". *shrug*

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