I liked this poem. It was very creative and unquie in ways. I tohught the flow was good, and the rythym was amazing. I really enjoyed reading it. Also captured great images. :] Lovely Job. I give it a Five.

I liked this as well. it was something new and original

I can whole-heartedly relate to this poem. It's like every line you spoke was written of my life and spoke straight from your heart and into mine. Wonderful job.. absolutely wonderful. Every word rang a song of truth, and I don't find that very often.

For a title I'd recommend "Shadows" or "Shadows on my face" or somethign to that affect. I dunno lol. All I can say is great job.

Wonderful poem!!! I absolutely loved this. It was different, unique and very well written. I have nothing more to say except keep up your great work. xxx

Maybe a title like "Avoiding a spotlight glare" Or something around that area would be good...or maybe that's just me. =/

Beautiful *sob* Loved it! I can relate, and well, ya it's sad. Loved it 5/5
[*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo

This was so new and original, well done, i loved the analogy it was really clever and i think ur message was really true, well done.

ps thanks for ur comment n i really agree that my poems last verse was missing something but i cudnt find out wat it was either, ta xx

Swim down to find the deeper meaning!!!!
:-P my english teacher always said that last year, however, i was never to good at it... boo hoo.
this poem is... AMAZING!!!!!
i love the words you used, and it flowed so well, also the rhymes weren't forced or anything, this is a perfect poem! it makes me think of my school, and when im around my friends and stuff like that.
great poem! 5/5!

Forever*Yours

I really enjoyed this one, it was very creative, and unique and in concept.
The flow was perfect and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

Oh i love this! i used to be an actress and this is totally it. by opening night everything's so old to you it sortof ends up feeling weird sometimes. anyways, great poem, and i totally got what you were talking about. great job.

WOW!! my favorite.. out of the one other i've read.. lol.. but im telling you now this is going to remain my favorite.. i like.. no LOVE how the whole poem is metaphorical.. i always try to write a poem like that but can never think of anything lol.. anyways.. this is really great.. the flow and rhyme.. again flawless.. and the message behind it is great.. cliche.. but you chose the perfect words to make this poem still a masterpiece.. really great joB!!

This was a great poem and im pretty sure that i got the message from it, it was written very well i loved it 5/5

You are very talented This poem reads like a story ,I liked that. will read more.

Awww this was cute I felt like I was in like the 4th grade or something and having to go onstage lol it was great nothign to critique on!

Awww. i could feel the fear of the character and it ended so sadly. i loved it.

much love and many kisses,
bex

I think i like this poem better than the one you requested i read. The flow was uniterrupted and i loved the story line. Excellent vocabulary you have!

Keep the ink flowing (or the tape recorder playing... your choice...)

Great job!
5/5
Stephen White

WOW very deep! well penned! I really like this poem!

Amazing alagory. This is really a work of art.

Amazing, truthfully its like that for alot of people. what i interpretated( which may not be true ) is that you are saying that you cant be afraid and you have to do it or dont, and when you do everything feels right

Wow...this is so wonderful...this poem is so well written...and i like the way you used the stage fright to hide your message...(i have to present a play this year...)
amazing poem

*isabel*

This is great. everyone goes through stage fright. sometimes i get it myself but i always pull through. 5/5