Comments : When you love someone

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    Wow this is a really awesome poem!! i give u some props on this one.....it really expresses how u feel..and i really liked that.. :)..

  • 18 years ago

    by Hope

    This poem is really good...i like it a lot... keep writting!
    *~[Zkey]~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    Hey! Thanks for your comments!
    Right some feedback for you...
    Love these lines
    'Your the air that i breath,
    And your all that i need'
    They're just incredible lines. On a poor note i don't really like the very last line. It kind of takes away the whole feel of the rest of the poem. It's a good piece of poetry that conveys your feelings well. Love it! 5/5!!!

    Jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwwww..that was so sweet! the descriptions were beautiful, as were the metaphors you used.. the flow worked well most of the time and the emotion was loud and clear.. nice job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marz

    Lurve it

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    I especially love this one verse...

    Babe like a flower needs rain,
    I need you to help my pain,
    Without you in my life,
    I wouldn't be the same.

    keep it up... 5/5

  • Awww...thats cute. its so beautifull to be inlove... :-P.

    thanks for your comment it means alot to me!!
    keep it up!!

    xoxo
    take care

    p.s. 5/5

    Diana

  • 18 years ago

    by IML

    Hi thanks your comment too. Nice poem here liked it the best..mmm ttyl and thanks again. bye.

  • 18 years ago

    by Shumz R Khan

    Hmmm jus a word came to my mind after reading ur poems... iss just WOW... really really u r v gud writter...!
    brilliant work!!!
    BYE!

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    Cute. i like it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by MissManda

    I like this poem alot i barly have time to put my poems up because of school and my family but i will try thanx for the comment

    ~mandy~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Last Soul

    I like this one a lot. I usually don't write love poems, not happy ones anyway, but I do enjoy reading them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chorro

    I like this one i have a relashinship like that it really touched home i hope you liked my as mush as i like yours -chorro-

  • 18 years ago

    by damaged rose

    I think this poem is pretty good, I liked the rhyming, and the lines were very sweet. I've been writing sad poems lately, they're addictive...so I know what you mean, sometimes it's hard to write happy things. But this one is really good.