by Kidd Aug 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Star light, |
by Zack O.o
Pretty good but now step it up, put some form in your poem, quatrains are nice and simple aabb or abab |
I agree with her ^^^ I wish I had a guy to write a poem like that for me. You must really love some girl...I hope everything works out for you. I loved this poem, it was beautiful...Great job. |
This poem is sooooo sweet. I wish I had that |