I love you

by Randomness   Aug 11, 2006


I want to spend forever in your arms.
When we touch it doesn't seem real.

When I hear your name it makes my heart skip a beat.
when you smile at me it makes me wanna faint.
You say my name
and its music to my ears

I love you more then the earth, the world, and my life.
with out you nothing makes sense.
The way I feel is just so passionate.

They say I'm getting to attached
I say I'm not attached enough
Ive never been so certain in my life about anything except the way I feel for you.

I've fallen for you.
I love you
Nothing will ever change that,
Not peoples opinion on this poem
Not the criticizes ill get in my life
Nothing

We are perfect together.
I love you.
Forever, and ever, babe.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    For me this is romantic and u know how u express ur feelings to ur love wonderful...in writing poems the most important, all what u put are comes in your heart... well god bless u!4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very wonderful poem here, another 5/5 from me, cause you deserve it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hehe, that is cute. I like it. I should show the boy I love this poem. :]]

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice poem...I don't know your age, but I know that your heart can mislead you so just be careful. Thanks for ur comments! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by nadosh passion

    First don't worry no body will criticize u or ur love coz love is wholly...& we can't mock it
    secondly i think ur poem is great coz it speaks about the love u own...& it rises above all the grammer of english that u r supposed to follow...thats why it doesn't matter if ur spelling or grammer is wrong coz its true & sensual....so god bless u & ur love

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