First don't worry no body will criticize u or ur love coz love is wholly...& we can't mock it
secondly i think ur poem is great coz it speaks about the love u own...& it rises above all the grammer of english that u r supposed to follow...thats why it doesn't matter if ur spelling or grammer is wrong coz its true & sensual....so god bless u & ur love

Nice poem...I don't know your age, but I know that your heart can mislead you so just be careful. Thanks for ur comments! Jpoet*

Hehe, that is cute. I like it. I should show the boy I love this poem. :]]

A very wonderful poem here, another 5/5 from me, cause you deserve it.

For me this is romantic and u know how u express ur feelings to ur love wonderful...in writing poems the most important, all what u put are comes in your heart... well god bless u!4/5