That is real cute keep writing ur poems are gr8

That was sum ace(awesome) writing. straight to the point huh, lol thats what i try to do but i end up tellin a story, i like to write as if i'm paintin a picture in the readers mind so they can see exactly what i'm talkin bout, but i still need alotta practice. and yes, everything i write about is all true, but i write, about past experiences and also future feelings which i know i'm gonna feel, like a friend leaving, i'll write about it like year before they leave so i'll be ready for it when the time comes for them to depart, or when i know i'm gonna lose a loved one or break up wit a chik, or get wit a chik, or just have a thought in my head of what could have happened. also i write about how i feel in times of sorrow, and when i feel like the world is against me, so i make sure evrything i write is pure and true from my heart. and great job by the way, i enjoyed this poem, i'ma give u a 5/5, keep up the poems, and thanx for showing such an interest in my lyrics and taking notice for my talent, most just breeze threw my words, and don't really follow what there reading, only a true lyricist can, so holla bak aight. pCe