by lexie Aug 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I see her lips moving, |
by Rodney Kirby
Really touching , im sorry |
by Rachel RTVW
I am sorry for your loss. It is always sad to hear about a tragedy like this. It is nice that you have an outlet to express your emotions. keep it up! |
Wow, great poem, such intense emotion throughout the whole thing. verry well written, great structure and flow 5/5 |
by Esther
I like although it is very sad and depressing! lol! but i couldn't feel the rythm, soz! it was probably just me though! (i is dumb)! but i liked ur poem a yway |
Very sad, and emotional. it was truly amazingly written. the onyl mistakes were small grammatical and spelling ones. like to instead of too and no apostophe's.. Overall it flowed beautifully and really made me sad.. |